Description:We read a story called "Licked". We wrote down what it was about. We chose the ideas from the book and wrote about them. This is the result.
Me and my brother Joey wanted to pull a rat prank on our mum. She is extremely scared of rats.
When she was doing the dishes we put a giant fake rat in the cabinet so when she put away the plates she would get a huge fright. But then the plan backfired... Dad came home and he was hungry he walked in the kitchen and got out the cake from the fridge slowly crept to the cabinet and before We could say stop AHHHHH.
You kids are in big trouble we both quietly sneaked back to our rooms and locked the door. in the morning when he calms down we can make it up to him even though the plan didn't work it was still worth it. next time we need to think bigger and better I said yeah way bigger said joey.
Hi Gaby I really enjoyed reading your story about how your prank went wrong, I especially liked how you reflected on how it went wrong at the end and used this to make improvements in the future. This shows me that you are willing to learn from you mistakes. Some feedforward for next time would be to ensure you use capital letters to start sentences. Great effort Gaby!
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