WALT: Write to inform
Task: Share my experiences at Russell Street School swimming sports as a recount.
Success Criteria
- Plan
- Introduction- Where, When, Who, Why
- n order
- Past tense (walked, ran, said)
- Adding details, think about what are the most powerful words
Wow Gabby, I can't believe you nearly fell asleep! I can see you used your plan well to develop your ideas. I wonder if you were to keep working on this story what ideas and language you would add? Thanks for sharing.
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