Description: For writing this term we have been writing about a scene and our scene with Nic is a jungle and my story is about a girl getting lost I did not write what her name was or what she looked like because that is what the readers have to imagine here is my story I hope you like it.
Feedback&Feedforward: great work Gaby i love the way how you have described your story and where you are and how you feel, and i have no feedback for you all I have no it is great. Libby.
Evaluation: Thanks Libby for the feedback but I think that next time I could discribe the place where the girl was but other then that I think I did a great job and I hope you liked it as much as I did.
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