-Abby
evaluation:I think I did well with adding detail but I need to work on my punctuation.
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Wednesday 17 June 2015
writing term 2 2015
In writing we have been writing about a picture and writing what we think what happened In the picture here is what I think what happened.
here is the picture we had to write about.
feedback/feedforward: If you look closely you can see that you have paragrafs but since you skipped lines next time you write with paragrafs you could skip 2 lines so people can actually actually see!
-Abby
evaluation:I think I did well with adding detail but I need to work on my punctuation.
-Abby
evaluation:I think I did well with adding detail but I need to work on my punctuation.
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Yes, punctuation can become tricky when you are writing a more complex piece of writing. Remember that reading it out loud will help with this.
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