Troys Writing Term 4

Description: In poutama we have been spit up into three groups Elly is doing report writing Rebecca is doing descriptive words and Troy Is doing Poetry I am In Troys group and we have been learning about Cinquains, Limericks, Free Verse Poetry and ect.

Big Idea:   Click Here For Big Idea

Evaluation: I think I did well at making the poem rhyme but next time I should make the poem longer so the reader can read more to get more hooked in.

Feedback\FeedForward:

My Cinquain

Description: For writing I have been doing poetry with Troy we have been doing lots of different types of poetry and this type is called a cinquain poetry for cinquain poetry you use how many syllables are in the words like puppy has two syllables.

2 Bark Bark,

4 Sleep ,Snore ,Sleep ,Snore,

6 Mailman ,Woof ,Woof ,Chasing,

8 Digging ,Barking ,Running Away,

2 Puppy

Inquiry

Description: Every Thursday I have been doing inquiry with James we have been doing 3D printing
It has been fun because we can make cool plastic toys using SketchUp.

I think it will benefit kids in the future because they might like to play with the cool things we make.

I am thinking outside the box by trying to make way cooler things like planes and spaceships.


this is the spongebob I made it was quite hard work but for some reason it did not want to print.

 this it my monkey I don't think we have tried to print it yet but I hope it works.

I have finished my spongebob and this is how it turned out.

Blooms Questions

• What is your opinion of the bikers. Do you think they should fly or do you they should leave the place they are.

They should fly because that might be a way out.

• Do you think the place they are at is a trap that is meant to keep them there for ever.

No I think they are supposed to get out

• What do you think Nareen’s reaction to the bikers and the message is.

Scared,Hopeful,Wanting To Run

Dear Diary

dear diary

20/11/2015

Strange things are happening at home my brother Is starting to grow fur and howl at a full moon my dad is getting odder and odder every day yesterday he said he was going to cook and it was actually good my mom is turning in to my dad she is starting to hammer stuff together with no care at all and today she made a tree house in ten seconds and my sister who knows what my sister is turning in to she started to eat out of the cats bowl and whenever I get near she scurries of out side and she almost jumped over a fence and funniest thing yet my cat it talking and standing on two legs and me you don't want to know what I turned Into

A CHAIR!

what now life couldn't get any worse 

Dear Diary 

21/11/2015

 we some how got back to normal except my house...my house turned Into a...
FISH!

wooden painted fully furnished fish .

Blooms Questions

EVALUATING

• What is your opinion of the bikers and do you think that they are there to stop them.

Yes otherwise why would they be there.

APPLYING

• Do you think Nareen has been caught in a trap when she goes through the go past go.

Yes I think the bikers did It.

UNDERSTANDING

• IN YOUR OWN WORDS DESCRIBE HOW  Kelly and carl are feeling when Nareen went through the go pass go.

sad worried proud of here terrified.

Free Verse Poetry

Ghost Train

I stepped in the train it starts to rumble another train bumps into the back of us.

The man says keep your hands and legs inside the vehicle at all times so we duck down.

My dad takes our caps off so they won't fall off it was 

so loud I regret coming.

It smelt real bad in there it smelt like old people like real old people and it smelt like rotten eggs sorry for the man who made this place i'm telling you it was BAD!

Vampires jump scared us as we came out I felt proud of my self.

my little brother could not even speak I gave him a pat on the back my dad says that was a waste of $18 I said.

We want a refund.

(smell-hear-see-felling-touch)

Evaluation: next time I could improve making it rhyme and I could make the story more detailed so the reader will get more hooked in.