Tuesday, 24 November 2015

Blooms Questions

  • What is your opinion of the bikers. Do you think they should fly or do you they should leave the place they are.

They should fly because that might be a way out.

  • Do you think the place they are at is a trap that is meant to keep them there for ever.

No I think they are supposed to get out

  • What do you think Nareen’s reaction to the bikers and the message is.

Scared,Hopeful,Wanting To Run

Thursday, 19 November 2015

Dear Diary





dear diary

20/11/2015

Strange things are happening at home my brother Is starting to grow fur and howl at a full moon my dad is getting odder and odder every day yesterday he said he was going to cook and it was actually good my mom is turning in to my dad she is starting to hammer stuff together with no care at all and today she made a tree house in ten seconds and my sister who knows what my sister is turning in to she started to eat out of the cats bowl and whenever I get near she scurries of out side and she almost jumped over a fence and funniest thing yet my cat it talking and standing on two legs and me you don't want to know what I turned Into

A CHAIR!

what now life couldn't get any worse 

Dear Diary 

21/11/2015

 we some how got back to normal except my house...my house turned Into a...
FISH!
wooden painted fully furnished fish .





Blooms Questions

EVALUATING

  • What is your opinion of the bikers and do you think that they are there to stop them.
Yes otherwise why would they be there.

APPLYING

  • Do you think Nareen has been caught in a trap when she goes through the go past go.
Yes I think the bikers did It.


UNDERSTANDING

  • IN YOUR OWN WORDS DESCRIBE HOW  Kelly and carl are feeling when Nareen went through the go pass go.
sad worried proud of here terrified.


Tuesday, 17 November 2015

Free Verse Poetry

Ghost Train


I stepped in the train it starts to rumble another train bumps into the back of us.


The man says keep your hands and legs inside the vehicle at all times so we duck down.


My dad takes our caps off so they won't fall off it was 

so loud I regret coming.


It smelt real bad in there it smelt like old people like real old people and it smelt like rotten eggs sorry for the man who made this place i'm telling you it was BAD!


Vampires jump scared us as we came out I felt proud of my self.

my little brother could not even speak I gave him a pat on the back my dad says that was a waste of $18 I said.

We want a refund.


(smell-hear-see-felling-touch)

Evaluation: next time I could improve making it rhyme and I could make the story more detailed so the reader will get more hooked in.




Monday, 26 October 2015

blooms questions

Remembering:
List 3 ideas of where you think carl has gone

1. To another planet
2. Inside a tornado
3. sucked into the spiral chrysalis

understanding:
discribe the place you think carl is

1. scary
2. dark
3. like death

Appying:
what question would you ask in an interview with nareens dad

1. why don't you get along with your wife?

Analsaying:
why do you think nareens parents don't get along?

1. beacause one of them did not want a child.

Evaluating:
based on what you know , how would you explain carls disappearance?

1. sucked into another demotion

 creating:

create a new character for this story charlie brown carls older OLDER brother Very annoying







Sunday, 18 October 2015

discovery time

today for discovery time I played minecraft pc.

I showed creativity by making a minecraft SPCA.

I showed agency by being kind to people around me.

I showed excellence by making it look my best.

next week for DT  I am going to make a door for the bathroom and make the counter look better.

Image:












Tuesday, 13 October 2015

Pre Reading Task Week 1 Term 4


  • What made you choose this book?  I chose this book because it looks very cool and when I read the blurb it made me inspired to read it.

  • What appeals to you?  I think that book appeals to me because it gives me ideas what to read next because the author of the book would of tried to get people hooked in to the story because most of the story stands out allot.

  • What hooked you in? I got hooked in by the blurb that said it had monsters and dragons because I like fantasy books so I think this is a good book for me.

  • What hooked you in? I got hooked in by the blurb that said it had monsters and dragons because I like fantasy books so I think this is a good book for me.







1. Title - The Spiral Chrysalis sounds like a scary but fun title so I wanted to read It the reason why I picked it is because it looks scary and I like scary books I wonder what Chrysalis means the book is very tempting to read because of its cover.


2. Cover Design - I think the illustrations look a bit scary because it looks like there is blood on the book and the spirals look like ghosts zooming threw the page but I know its not real because its just fantasy and so its not real.

  3. blurb - the blurb really hooks me in because it talks about fantasy and I like fantasy books so I think this book would be good for me and the blurb makes me want to read more and more until I finish but once I finish that one I will want a second book just like the.

 4. Predictions - I think the set is in frozen vale and I think that they are trying to save there friend called kelly I think that kelly is screaming for help but they don't know witch way kelly got kidnapped.